shainhouse Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Enjoy...http://www.jambase.com/headsup.asp?storyID=7474peace- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jay Funk Dawg Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 is this review by Cheeze Head? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hux Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Nice review Shane.From a Dog-heads view, the only notable parts of that set that might've warrented some mention were the fact that Hard Rain is a new cover for the band and Werewolves a real rarity, but great review, wish I could've been there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Del Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 With a somewhat predictable but overtly welcome "Werewolves of London" encore, Ratdog ended the night of spooks, treats, and surprises in fine form, complete with Weir emerging after "Franklin's" with a top hat and a black and white Werewolf mask.Wasn't Bobby's face just painted white? I don't remember the mask... Good review Shain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shainhouse Posted November 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Yeah... it was just face paint. I'll change that. I couldn't tell from where I was standing.Also, if you read the comment section, I got criticized for being too wordy. I totally agree with him. I have been trying real hard to write conversationally but the way I write just comes out this way. I in no means try to be loquacious, it just happens... I'm sorta glad someone pointed that out. I'm gonna keep focusing my efforts on finding a way to combine the wordiness with the non-wordiness. Any comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarcO Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 (edited) Yeah... it was just face paint. I'll change that. I couldn't tell from where I was standing.Also, if you read the comment section, I got criticized for being too wordy. I totally agree with him. I have been trying real hard to write conversationally but the way I write just comes out this way. I in no means try to be loquacious, it just happens... I'm sorta glad someone pointed that out. I'm gonna keep focusing my efforts on finding a way to combine the wordiness with the non-wordiness. Any comments?yes. your comments about being "too wordy" are too wordy.editing is fun! Edited November 17, 2005 by Guest is to the are to the are not is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Del Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 editing is fun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shainhouse Posted November 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Thanks Buddy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TomFoolery Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Get an idiot to proof-read for you. Whatever words they don't know have to be axed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
secondtube Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 "I in no means try to be loquacious"i didn't just read that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jaimoe Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 (edited) I have a tough time with show reviews. I now try to keep this in the front of my mind when preparing to write a concert review: Don't be like the excessively descriptive and long-winded Jambands.com reviews. Now, I wish I had another crack at editing my last MMJ review Edited November 17, 2005 by Guest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shainhouse Posted November 18, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2005 I work for Jambands.com too.Sorry Steve... It should be; I, in no means, try to be loquacious. hehe. Works no contingency? No! Money Down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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